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Re: My Teacher
This poem is about my crappy Humanities teacher who i hate so much :evil: As I sit in my class, I think I might blast My teacher is boring and ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: A Day In The Life Of A Rubber Duck
Hey Kenzie Ok first off. The name is awesome. I like this! Very much like Toy Story. I agree with this. I think it's really cute. Notice this isn't finished ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Knives and jewels
Thanks! I was trying to get the empathic/imagery to the song, the chorus had alot of tweaking so it means alot :) Also, just change the formatting, any better? Hey ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Aztec
Hey Disturbed Disorder. I like poems and stories about the ancient civilazations (If that's spelled wrong, sorry. The spell check button is still missing for me.) So last year we ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming
That's kinda cute. If a guy said that to me I'd just stare at him then say: "And.... That means.....?" And the last bit a friend typed in last second ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Gimme what I love
Hey again Jake. First off: or even eat a sandwich. Gladly! *Makes a sandwich and prepares to review* This will be hard without a spell check button. [center] Some days, ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Mary Sue Therapy
I love this! I kind of feel sad for Ebony now. And Bella..... “I’ve been waiting for this for five stinking years!” Bella ran to the woman, who tried to ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Experiment: Failure (Prologue-Chapter One)
I really liked that you've brought up the more traditional image of vampires instead of having a clichéd plot and story-line like Twilight. Your bringing up of the Cross being ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: ??!? -_-
I don't think there's anything to say about this.... I can see why this got as many reviews as it did. The title was weird. ... kekekekeke! Ahaha! Ah! Ah..! ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Life in the Gauntlet
Ok. First I did spell check and didn't find much in need of fixing up in that department. The ending seemed powerful enough. I've heard that a lot of people ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Let's
Let’s be insane, sweet, because sanity is sorely overrated. Strait jackets are so much fun. :D Yes! They are! I love this poem because it's just... I can't really think ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Help me mummy
Hiya Retrodisco. I found a few grammar and spelling errors. "Troops brace yourself!" Captain - shouted. He was stood at the front of the boat as we approached the sure. ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Killer~2
This is a change of prescpetive. 1 In life, there are some things you regret, some you forget, and some you can’t get your mind off of. I was five ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Charlie Manning
Hey there LiveLaughLove. I found some spelling and a few grammar-ish errors. This is a kinds random piece that I wrote and I'm not sure what to do with it. ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Broken
Hey DisturbedDisorder. I didn't see any errors. Okay, So this is the first time I've really tried to do a non- rhyming poem, If it flows this good it doesn't ...
Aug 12, 2010
