LadyMysterio

Whoaa this is good

Oooh this was nice! I recently just read 1st and 2nd Samuel!

Oh wow, thank you!!

Hihi! Thanks for all of your reviews on my stuff you have provided some helpful insight. Ah I suppose you do have a point of the waiting POVs, so I ...

oooh ok!

Hello again! XD I appreciate you giving me lots of notes!! I'm glad you've been enjoying it too :D

Hi again! Thank you for all of the little rephrasing bits and whatnot! Ooh ok interesting about it being rushing originally it was written during NanoWritMo, so it probably was ...

Hi Noah! Yes I would love any thoughts you have on pacing! Thank you so much for all the Grammer bits and what it, I do not mind nitpicky!

Hi Noah! Thank you for the review! I appreciate your thoughts on the Doctor, I wasn't quite sure how it'd come across to the reader so that's good to know. ...

Thank you minty! I think that note on the bit who ran into Verena is a good idea. Actually reminds me, he comes in later in the story >.> And ...

It's okay XD I have them marked like 1.1 and up so I can keep track of what I've edited base off of reviews!

Hi sky!! Thank you for the review!! I suppose your a bit lost on context hopping in on this chapter XD in the first chapter I do throw more character ...

Ooh that may be an error! I've had some trouble with the publishing centers. thanks for pointing that out!!

Whoa, this was a wonderful review!! Thank you so much!! (Also I love the graphics you use in your reviews) I'm glad your enjoying the story, and thank you again ...

Hii thank you so much for your feedback and review!!