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Re: Humana Avis
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!!! This is seriously amazing! There were a few flaws I noticed but the way you built the tension and created the mood was really good. I think ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: The Magical Musician---1
Hello! Sorry it took me so long to get to this, I haven't been on the site for a few days! Firstly, I really like this! The premise is really ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: Resist or Regret (Ch.1)
Whoops, posting this again because I forgot to mark it as a review XD Hi! Just stopping by for a quick review! It looks like you have a pretty good ...
Feb 13, 2019 -
Re: Developing Black Girl Magic wasn't easy
First off, this is really deep and personal. Thank you so much for being willing to share it. I would like to add that as a (very) white person, I ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: Stratagem ~ Chapter 1
Alright, review time! First off, this sounds like it's on its way to becoming a pretty cool story! The idea of magically summoning humans as a magic system seems interesting! ...
Feb 7, 2019 -
Re: Dear Diary,
Giving reviewing second try, I hope it's helpful! First off, I noticed you have a ton of unnecessary commas. Unfortunately, I'm not amazingly good at finding unnecessary commas (I tend ...
Feb 6, 2019 -
Re: Chapter One: Catarina
Alright, this is my first time reviewing so my apologies if I don't do it quite right! First off, I really loved this. I think the pacing is very good ...
Feb 4, 2019