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Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 3
%u201CMy dad%u2019s here anyway.%u201D Ella said, running towards her Mazda, %u201CSee you tomorrow!%u201D She called back. I smiled and waved at her. She should be lowercased I teared it apart ...
Jun 22, 2019 -
Re: Doppelganger
Periods and commas in the wrong spots, wrong use of colons, double spaces instead of single. And you seem to say what the protagonist thinks instead of showing us. Also, ...
Jun 21, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
No! I just don't make sense XD
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
I know, I meant I can't wait to read it :P And, I wasn't trying to get you to change the color. I just changed it during the review for ...
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
I understand! Great work and I look forward to part 2
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
I know. Just let me know when you have XD
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: Believing in wisdom
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Jun 18, 2019
Wesh! I'm Jade you know that lol and I'm just going to give my thoughts on this :D! The title caught my attention so here we are! I am struck ... -
Re: Last Autumn (part)
I just got the notif for this.... Thanks XD!
Jun 16, 2019 -
Re: Why, Internet?
Thank you for the review! :D
Jun 14, 2019 -
Re: Anxiety
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Jun 14, 2019 -
Re: These New Ashes- Chapter One
XD I'll be waiting
Jun 12, 2019 -
Re: I'm a Writer-Poem about loving your passion more then yourself
Glad I could help :)
Jun 9, 2019 -
Re: It Doesn't Hurt me Anymore
I guessed that, lol! But I was just sating it was unneeded, but your choice :) Glad I could help
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.2
Ah, that clears things up! Thanks :)
Jun 6, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.2
8447 long. Sorry!
Jun 6, 2019