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Re: Monster
Hi, my name is Jade and I am really excited to be reviewing this today. I'm going to be going through this stanza by stanza. I might be a bit ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: Retalliating. Chapter One
Hey, It's Jade here and I'm about to review this. I did the prologue and so here I am. But enough. Let's get to it! I wanna read more about ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: Nature
This was breathtaking. The words and feelings took over me like a whirl of wind. This is amazing. I do have a few suggestion, though. -You could be a tad ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: The Sleeping Beauty Sonnet
This was awesome! It made sense, rhymed, and was good. It flowed but wasn't too flowey, if that makes sense. Keep up the good work. I really don't have any ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: The Orazat chapter 1
Thank you for tagging me in this! I really enjoyed it. I saw a few spelling mistakes (tbh those made me cringe but we all make them) Honestly, I wanna ...
Mar 12, 2019 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Six; The Doors of Fate.
Salutations. As I was wandering around the Green Room thy spied upon thou's title and it took to my interest (sorry for the olden day talk...). My name is Jade ...
Mar 11, 2019 -
Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Nine
Hello. My name is Jade and I will be reviewing this today. I saw it around the Green Room so I decided to read it and review it. I haven't ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 14
Hello, I'm Jade and I'll be giving my honest opinion on this today. I saw it in the Green Room, read it, and thought it deserved a review. WHAT I ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: Streeetside Sonnet
Hello, my name is Jade and I saw this in the Green Room. The title caught my interest so I've decided to review it. I will go through it line ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: Coffins
The detail was incredible and I almost choked on my snack while reading this. I can still just imagine the faces when they burst out of the coffin. I think ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: Dahlia and DnD
Hi, I'm Jade and I'll be reviewing your work. I found this while wandering the shelves of the Green Room. I read it and I think it deserves a review. ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: Branded pt. 2 (Revised)
Hi my name is Jade and I'll be reviewing this. I found it in the Green Room and it the title caught my attention. I'm afraid I haven't read part ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: Scene Spoiler (Royal Hunt)
Hi, Anma! It's your friend Jade here to review this. Let's get started. (I'm excited.) And just so you know, I will be giving you my honest opinion. I do ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (17)
Hello, my name is Jade and I'll be reviewing your work today. I found this in the Green Room but I have no idea why it's still there. This deserves ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: The Consultation
This was so good. I really enjoyed reading it! What I liked: The flow of this is phenomenal. The details/plot is quite good, I could feel like I was there. ...
Mar 7, 2019
