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LJF

  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Does Clickbait Work on Poetry?

    Very good question! We can all relate to feeling drowned out in today's world of drama obsession and five second attention spans, and we've all been caught up in the ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: if only you weren't so afraid to fly

    WHAT EVEN?!?! Why are all your poems so amazing?!?! I am in awe of your absolute brilliance. But seriously, this is soooooooo good. I love how you manipulate that flying ...

    Jul 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: so much unsaid

    Jul 23, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Things I'm Bad At

    I reallly, I really like this poem. I love the unbroken style-- it gives it a sort of energy and makes me feel like you're talking right next to me. ...

    Jul 23, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Hopefully Sky

    I LOVE this story so much! I know most people might be turned off by the characters not having names or any distinct details about their backgrounds, but that's my ...

    Mar 29, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: shah jahan road

    I really liked this story, but there were several indicators that you wrote too fast and didn't proofread it properly. You left several things that ought to be capitalized lowercase- ...

    Mar 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: deleted

    I really like this story! The emotion, the ambiguity, and that action-packed, heartbreakingly climactic final scene- my goodness! My mind was just going a million miles an hour. It was ...

    Mar 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Supernatural Re: Removed Work

    I really, REALLY like this. I love stories about the fey, and changlings are their own breed of awesomeness. I am a little confused as to how the parents knew ...

    Mar 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Without me (Edited)

    You tell him, girl! I like this! It's fun and refreshing, but glaringly honest-- a great combination! At first glance, it might look like any other brokenhearted story, but it's ...

    Mar 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Blood

    Oh. My. Goodness! This poem is too real. I can FEEL the pure, raw emotion you've put into this poem, and it hits me right where it hurts. I so ...

    Mar 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Yokai Nights Volume 1: chapter 1

    Marvelous! As an avid reader of light novels, I couldn't help but want to read this story. I've got to say, the story and setting were clearly very well-researched. It ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    I happen to have read the original "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Anderson several times, most recently just a few weeks ago, so I have a little more context ...

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: All my different ways

    LOVELOVELOVELOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the most relatable poems I've seen in a long time. Everyone has feelings they try so hard to express, in so many different ways. Yet, ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: ​Chapter one dream boy

    Nice! Incredibly intriguing, this pulled me in from the first line. I really want to see what happens next. There were a few formatting and spelling errors, though. A) When ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Till There Was You

    OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH! More Jane and Paul? Yes, please! This piece gave me a lot of context into their relationship, and I really enjoyed it. It's beautiful and sweet, yet, at the ...

    Jan 18, 2018


He who has a why to live for can bear with almost any how.
— Friedrich Nietzsche