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  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Interstate 5897

    Amazing. That's the word that trailed behind me as I read this spectacular piece of work. This appeals to me not only because I can relate, but because it is ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Childhood Poetry

    *I want to make this review more directed toward the author.* I fully relate to your thinking that old work is cringe-worthy. But really, from that perspective, I think you ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited

    This beautifully written perspective of bullying is a stellar example of good, effective writing. As a writer myself (well, how obvious--aren't all of us here writers?), I only settle for ...

    Aug 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Crystal Shards

    This short has, initially, a healthy disregard for purpose; it gradually works up to the final point, which works like a charm, in my opinion. This writer obviously understands the ...

    Aug 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: To Wander on a Cloud

    Overall, despite the well-crafted sentences, I wasn't able to discern the actual point of the short. I could however tell that the descriptions were forced. "Through LEAKS between clouds?" I ...

    Aug 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    My first impression as I clicked this link was that I'd be reading yet another low-class, highly emblematic representation of a teenager in angst. But what I got was a ...

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Feelings

    I've noticed a lot of people have commented on the grammatical errors, so I'll refrain from that in this review. As for the visual that is supposed to help convey ...

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Xynophen

    Quite frankly this suspense thriller put coupons on the idea of slight-of-hand. Not only did the occurrences happen quicker than I could keep up, but they lacked the ineffectiveness of ...

    Aug 7, 2015


Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
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