Kwantack

Wow. This has amazing emotion to it. I like the last line too! You did a really nice job with this and I have no complaints or anything. Really REALLY ...

Yeah, I agree with the fact that the beginning is a bit confusing...perhaps you could clear this up a little? I got lost in the words and it took a ...

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! I love it when italics are used in poetry, or any sort of writing, for that matter. And you didn't abuse it. You used just enough. I ...

Your use of adjectives and describing things is wonderful. You do a good job with that. I enjoyed reading this poem because of it and don't ever stop describing things ...

This is really good! It has great flow...each line works out perfectly. I like the shortness of it and how it's right to the point. And the shortness of the ...

Yeah, like armstronge said, I think you should put this into a poetic format with stanzas and lines and not just a paragraph. But this I truly enjoyed! It has ...

This poem is very simple yet very intense. I dont' know how you did it, but you managed to create a poem of which I cannot describe in one word. ...

Whoa, the rhyming in this is spectacular!! The questions give it depth and I think the flow is really good. Some poems lack flow terribly (like my own...grr...) I enjoyed ...

You never fail to amaze me with your poetry. I love reading it and to me it's fantastic in every way. Your writing is just...wow...you know? This one in paticular ...

This is clear and simple and easy to understand and it doesn't give me a headache. Thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed this and I really like the title. ...

Wow!! I really love this poem and I really love rain (partly because all we get here is snow XP Bleh!) But yeah. Grammar and punctuation are really good as ...

I think this is a bright poem. I would suggest capatalizing all beginnings of all lines to make the poem look uniform. This is an easy fix. Other then that ...

These lyrics are simply phenomenal!! You should definetely make this into a song! It's very well done and properly written. I think you're very good at writing lyrics. You have ...

I love the title!! It's very true! This is really good and I loved it! On the second stanza, I'm thinking you may want to beef it up a little ...

This is really moving!!!! I love this, and you did a great job presenting it (grammar, punctuation, etc). My favorite part is the last stanza with the death and the ...