Krupp

Hahaha...great ending. I know I'd feel the very same way. Once again, the dialogue fits perfectly, and everything seemed to transition perfectly. This time around, I didn't really see anything ...

I support Disturbed, and I support Black Sabbath...good bands, those two. It's what I was raised on during high school. With that said, for what it was about, the song ...

Ted Dekker is one of a handful of Christian writers who actually is respectable. I appreciate Three because it isn't trying to shove the whole Christianity thing down your throat; ...

Epic \m/ :) I'll write the guitar. We just need a drummer and another guitar player. (Nobody listens to the bass in death metal). Pig Destroyer doesn't have a bassist; ...

...I must admit, there are a lot of readers on here who would find it difficult to get into this kind of poem. It doesn't really suck you in, like ...

You should pick a langue, because right now you're a mix of upper-class\irish and modern day english. Chose slang or upper class. ofir What I was kind of going for ...

Clearly, Bloodstainedwhite hasn't heard a song by Agoraphobic Nosebleed haha...not that there is any real need to do so; unless you're into that kind of stuff.. Yet another song with ...

To be honest, this is more prose or even lyrics than it is poetry. It just doens't fit the poetry-vibe. I can understand when anger influences a writing, but that ...

I must admit, that was a lot more intelligent than I expected glancing at the title. At first I was confused as I started out reading, but the poem's kinda ...

This was a decently-done poem. Not bad at all. The rhyming scheme seemed on the first read a little strange, but then I had to remember that I used that ...

This was pretty good. I would suggest capitalizing the 'I' for every line (as the poster above no doubt mentioned) and I would just get rid of the slashes that ...

Well, that was terrific. I found it a complete pleasure to read, and I haven't read anything quite like that in a while. The only thing that bothered me was ...

It was simple, and fun to read. I'm sure it sounds better when there's music playing to it, too. Besides that, there is only one thing that I would consider ...

maybe new metal (crappy metal). Haha, great way of putting it. The song wasn't bad. I think the first part of the chorus needs a little more put into it, ...

escapism = good ehhhh....the problem with escapism is look what it did to Cobain. That's my only problem with thinking escapism is a good thing. It only causes people to ...