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Thanks :) I do have a better updated version of this somewhere on here. little more added to it. Did the music add to the scene?

Thank you! As I said it's a oneshot story that still needs some cleaning up to do but, I do what I can.

Thank you! I do indeed like to write a lot but need criticism.

Thank you! I do indeed like to write a lot but need criticism.

Thank you thank you! All in all I was inspired by a single song to write this. Of course this is the final update for this one shot story. Will ...

Thank you! Didn't really figure out which genre it would of went in but M/Fantasy does work better. Mess ups galore! Yeah I be full of em. Thanks for reading ...

Hey thanks for the review! I do plan on doing more somehow. Just amazes me that one song inspired me to write it up. And now another song I heard ...

oh hey thanks! yeah I was just blowing off steam when I did this. This is actually to a much bigger part of a story.

Thanks Devan. This was just something as test as I staged before. However yes I know that I need to expand on a lot of things, but the whole point ...

Thanks Devan. This was just something as test as I staged before. However yes I know that I need to expand on a lot of things, but the whole point ...

Quite good.

Duly noted.The point was a summery of sorts.

yup. haha

Thanks! Tell ya the truth I came up with this within a few mins (seeing just how far my abiity's can be). Was gonna do this if it'll pike any ...

Well I liked it. :D Seems to be sad and happy at the same time.