Konijn

Don't worry about Frank, hes not bothering me at all. And thank you for pointing this out. I should probably work on that.

Thank you for Frank. It means a lot to me.

Thanks for the advice, though the reason I had capitalized words such as "His" were because I was referring to The Lord. I understand where you are coming from though. ...

Thank you for writing it! It was excellent and very inspiring to me!

Thanks for the review! I will go back and edit this soon, and this is a great help.

Oh my gosh... I need to go take a minute to cry now...

Thanks so much for the review! I will go back and edit this, so it is very helpful that you point out some nitpicks. :)

Thanks for the review! I have officially revised it slightly and I thank you for the suggestions, as they clearly do work better for this poem. Thanks for the suggestions, ...

Me and my brother used to make up constellations, looking at different shapes that we could find in the stars. I hope that this helps, and thanks for the review!

I was writing about my morning, basically. For those who don't have prior knowledge, I don't get along very well with my mother. I had seen all these adoption papers ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Thanks so much for reading my poem! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Yeah I actually feel a lot better. My friends really helped cheer me up! :)

You helped a lot, thanks! I am working on my punctuation, sorry about that. As I said in the comment to Anima, I was really just throwing up my feelings. ...

Sorry it was so confusing! I was honestly just really upset this morning, so I decided to let it out on here. I wasn't really focused on punctuation.. sorry!