Konijn

Thanks Matt!

Thank you so much! :)

No problem!

I love the last two lines. A++

Thank you so much for writing this... I guess I'm not completely alone, am I? Every word you wrote I can agree with, because it's something I live through every ...

Thank you so much! :D

Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you!

Thank you so much for the review! I do plan on revising this to help the flow and theme, so your opinion is very helpful.

Thank you I will most definitely work on it!

Thanks for the review! I will definitely check out some of your works.

No problem- it's pieces like these that make me persevere to improve my own writing.

Twist ending! I love it!

Thank you so much!