Kobain72

First of all I just want to say I think the topic's great. I definitely know the situation and even if it gets quite personal at times (which I think ...

I'm afraid I can't add a lot that the previous reviewers haven't already, but I agree that these are good lyrics (better than lots of first songs I've seen). My ...

I quite liked the general idea of the song and, although its length worried me at first, on re-reading the lyrics I actually think the sparseness of your descriptions works ...

Much like everyone else who has reviewed this I really like this style of poetry and the imagery you used so I don't really have much more to add other ...

I really liked the song but i'm afraid i don't really have any constructive criticism for it. i do have a question though; i tried playing it and have to ...

I really liked this song too, although i have to agree with lordgluzman about the length. Depending on how long you plan the instrumental sections to be you might want ...

Hey, as far as criticisms go I couldn't really find anything that haven't already been mentioned and fixed so just wanted to add my support for this great song. It's ...

i thought this was great and, i dunno whether you meant this, but i could really easily hear this sung to a rage against the machine-like tune. and i actually ...

At first listen [with the music] I wasn't entirely sure how the two parts fitted together, but I think I've worked it out now and it does sound really good ...

I just wanted to add support for this. I thought it was really good; the topic was decent and I could easily place it to a tune in my head ...

First of all I really liked this poem (much like all the reviewers by the looks of it =) ). There's not much I can add that hasn't already been ...

I see what you mean, and i think its really interesting what you've tried - im all for experimentation, if no-one did that writing would get boring - but surely ...

I really liked that as the beginning of a story. I thought there was enough there to grab a reader, and I think the lack of background makes it all ...

to be honest I thought this story was very...weird, though I do find some of the jokes v funny (it helped when I realised it was meant to be a ...

What happens next?! What a gripping story, and that ending intrigues me (do you plan to write any more?). I especially liked the descriptions you used throughout. I also like ...