Knurla

Thank you for the reviews, everyone! It was sort of a last minute thing, and I was exhausted as well. Someone in chat suggested that I write about a golden ...

thank you. You are 100% correct about that. I didn't really know what I was writing at first. I didn't have a planned out writing style or anything, I just ...

I completely agree with everyone that this is a very beautiful poem, even if it is short! You're very talented to have caught some beauty through so little words, and ...

I didn't quite understand this poem, but the last two stanzas were quite powerful, and intriguing. The second to last stanza really made it seem more....dark, and troubling. This was ...

As all else have stated, this BEAUTIFUL poem could have gone without wthe repititions. Other than that, the imagery was magnificent! I love how speak of 'true love' through dancing!

I have to agree with Vernon. I feel like this poem could have been expressed with many more words, and that you was just ready to end it. The imagery ...

Hey SuzieCake! I don't exactly agree with Lone-Flower's third review from the top. "I made a mental note to call Darien when I woke up, and finally went to sleep." ...

I didn't really understand the poem either, but I liked it. It had sort of a...cheating husband feel to it. hehe!

This poem was very touching, and because of that most people will feel related to the subject of it. Great job! I love it!

Now that I've looked at it again...Was the character waiting on slow internet to load? xD

Good! Can't wait for the next chapter! I had to go over it a little bit to understand some things, but it was great! Good luck!

I didn't really feel the tune, but I liked the romance in it. It was touching, yet it had that...secretive tone to the words. It makes you wonder.

This one was pretty funny. I liked it! But like Jasmine said, you need to stick with one mood (I guess that's a way to put it). Good job!

I'm a "ginger kid" too, and I know what you mean. I have to think of those quick comebacks too, and sometimes they are crappy, like you said.

I liked it alot, but the park scene and the mysterious man reminded me too much of the book "Silver Kiss".