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Re: You and I and a Memory from Long Ago
Hello, hello! I haven't been on this site for sooo long. I got busy with school, and I haven't been writing much either. But anyway, back on point. Pieces like ...
Jun 6, 2012 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
Thank you very much for the reviews.:) And to those who were asking, yes, this is a humor piece. No girl in her right mind would accept someone this absurd. ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
Thank you everyone.:) Ah, Volt, you break my heart. It's my birthday today, my friend, please want me?:)
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Parallel
IT IS? O___O The premise of my poem is ruined. HAHA. I shall look into it, definitely. I get what you mean by this seeming unfinished. Thanks a lot. I ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Just to Let You Know
Hello again.:) I shall review this edited version.:) First of all, small nitpick: I wink, to let you know your special. I wink, to let you know your just another ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: A nice joke speech!
I've no idea how BK is like in the States or Wendy's or McDonald's... but in my country, McDonald's is gross. Wendy's is too expensive and BK is heaven. Love ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: No Money, No Honey
Sass. Haha. That's a new thing to say about poetry.;) Narcissistic. hmm... Unfortunately, I have to write an autobiography for my English class and must free myself of narcissism, else ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
Hey.:) I won't even try to critique this. I love it too much. I'll only say that you should run it on spellcheck because there were some typos. oh, well ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Forgive my Absence
Hello, hello. The two cannots are confusing, I see. To explain it, the first cannot would describe the lines above it. The second is for the final line in the ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Strained Smile
BF.:) It's kilig. I love this. I wanna read the prose version now. oh no, I have nothing else to say. I just absolutely adore this. Touching dude.XD
Aug 15, 2009 -
Re: This Pen is Retired, II
Thanks a lot for the reviews. bf: Good luck sa Heights. KayC: Thank you very much for that. Shina: Hmm... I'll have to fix those up. Perhaps I did it ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Impossible You
Truth is I didn't have Mr. Darcy in mind when I wrote this. Quite a feat since I think of him incessantly. The man from a book line came out ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: World Without Walls
thanks bf and West.:D West: Thanks to the advice on the eye to eye line, I edited it and I do believe that it does flow better. I'm trying to ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Tact
Hi bf! This poem is so you. haha. It's so smart.XD The show about lines confused me as well but after your explanation I got your point. Great wordplay. This ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Impossible You
Maraming salamat Kat and Tyler. Me dear kababayans.:) and thank you Loveless. Haha... Twilight eh? I'm not an Edward Cullen fanatic though and shocking shall be the day I write ...
May 22, 2009
