KingofTheDamned

The King never left. Tis only time took his glance. His past still reminds him all too much.....of so few. But one. He now treads among the shadows you have ...

You're very welcome. I do understand it a bit more now, being with the reason behind it. But yes, that is a VERY interesting idea. Please, if you do, alert ...

I wrote it wrong....again v.v "Let freedom wring the free forsaken" Thanks again for that error! :)

Teat is a tit or breast.

I appreciate your pointing that out. I wrote it down wrong, so here is the original lines: "To liberty bring for liberty taken Let freedom wring the liberty forsaken"

I appreciate your pointing that out. I wrote it down wrong, so here is the original lines: "To liberty bring for liberty taken Let freedom wring for liberty forsaken"

Teat is a tit or breast.

I've always had the taste of vomit in my mouth when Twilight was ever spoken. That fool, Stephanie, took a beautiful piece of horror and created this massive soap opera ...

Didn't say it was a bad review, I just said that this is one of my weak poems. I admit that, actually. I've done better. I also know that I ...

It was originally a piece inspired by a game called "Silent Hill: Homecoming." The game personifies this poem to a more "full" extent. It's an incredibly scary game with mystery/suspense ...

I appreciate the critiquing. I've always found outside influences to not quite be my strong points when writing. Only so much can be portrayed, so the aspect of story-telling becomes ...

Thanks, CGF. I appreciate the feedback. This is one of my freehand pieces that was not really inspired by an outside influence. I recently posted one called "Secrets of an ...

Actually, I wrote it as some creature creeping up and dragging me into a deep state of depression. If I wrote "upon me" then it would take away from the ...

Translating won't be a problem at all, it's just that the translation may screw up parts of it that had a deeper tone. But upon your request, I will certainly ...

Thank you, everyone, so very much for your thoughts and considerations on this piece. I do understand that now, with the twisted and almost sickening view of modern vampires due ...