Kim

this is beautiful. that pretty much sums it up. no critiquing just love it. awesome job. kim

you can take credit for it bear, you are the one teaching me how to write, and helping me with my mistakes. thank you so much.

great job, i loved this to the very last sentence. everyone else has already critiqued. so i get to just sit back and enjoy reading it. this is awesome. cant ...

as a poem this is ok, the first part kinda gruesome. laughed during some , and confused on others. it was hard to follow. but well written. kim

bear, you have me intrigued, this to me is the best chapter so far. i cant wait for you to post 12. this story keeps you glued to your seat. ...

this is full of emotion, you did a great job with ,i sure wish he would have called you back. i loved it kim

this is great bear, i like the drama and excitement in this chapter. also how you are putting the mystery together. i love it.

this is an awesome story, i really like the dialogue between your characters. very well written. very suspenseful. great job. kim

wow bear, this just keeps getting better and better, i never even thought the party would end the way it did, awesome job, cant wait for chapter 10

wow BBB, this is awesome. i couldnt read fast enough. i also wasnt expecting Samantha to be eliminated. you did a great job in keeping me hooked and on the ...

thank you for commenting. my word program keeps changing it to one of his ( kinds). i prefer (kind) also. it make me wonder if the program is always correct. ...

this just keeps getting better and better, it is definately a mystery thiriller. cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter. kim

wow , this is beautiful kim

this is very good, i just jumped on your site to check out your work, you are great. now i am going to go read the rest you have up.lol ...

thanks for posting this BBB. this story has so many twists and turns, i would never have thought mary and krobel related. wow. keep posting please. even if i am ...