Killyouwithwords

I'm not sure which song you're talking about, but I'm guessing it's Car Radio by Twenty-One Pilots? Either way, this is a pretty poem, simple but effective. I like the ...

Thank you! And yes, these arguments are common. I based their entire conversation off one I heard between some of my relatives. It's quite sad :(

Thank you :) Making light of these topics is something that a lot of us do these days, sometimes without even realizing it.

This is very moving :)

Thank you AmeliaGryffin! I'll go through and make sure nothing's too complicated. This really helped, thanks again :)

Thank you! I'll go through and fix those things. I'm hoping to submit it for publication so this really helped.

Oops, longer than I thought. But I hope it helped!

Lovely :)

Haha! Guess I should have realized that :) Glad I could help!

Thanks so much! You're completely right, I'll definitely take your suggestions to heart!

Yay! I'm happy you're keeping me posted! It's an amazing idea, kind of creepy but that only makes it better :)

I didn't actually have any other character. It was just the subject of the poem talking to the piece of themself they lost along the way. Old roads is just ...

Thank you for your feedback! What I meant by walking down old roads was that she/he is trying to become who they used to be, trying to forget all the ...

I feel like I'm almost completely out of my depth with this poem, so I won't even try to review it. IT WAS AMAZING. The first line pulled me in, ...

Don't get me wrong though, I loved your poem!!!