Kikaharu

it doesn't really sound like a poem to me and I didn't like it but that is my opinion. It's doesn't have a flow to it. I think that some ...

I like the feelings behided the poem. It's a poem that gets people really thinking about things. There isn't much that is wrong. I don't know if any of it ...

I like the poem. There are a few spelling mistakes. The flow of the poem is great. The lenght of the poem is fine. I think people will love this ...

i like the poem. It is unique and the words are a great match for the poem. There is a feeling that connected to me when I read it. I ...

I think it's ok but needs somethings to change not a lot. I like that it is related to things that happen to everyday people. It's an interesting poem just ...

I like it. It creative of but the story starts out of nowhere. you do have your MC in the beginning but you don't have the conflict in the beginning. ...

I like the poem. It is interesting and it flows well. The poem's meaning is true. People search for a person that will listen to them. You feel all alone ...