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Re: Hate Turns to Love- Proluge
Hello, I'm Kev! You caught my interest instantly when you said the character was gay. You don't see that often in stories and I always appreciate it when authors have ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Two
Hello, I'm Kev! I read all the current chapters in one setting because you had captured my attention so well. The concept you have going here is one of a ...
Aug 4, 2013 -
Re: A Walk Through the Park - Part 1
Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm Kev, and I'm going to review your piece (: You instantly caught my attention. The subject matter concerning stalkers can be unsettling, but in ...
Aug 2, 2013 -
Re: Mr. Jerry
Hey, I'm Kev! And just let me say, I adore this poem
Aug 1, 2013 -
Re: The Apocalypse Is Near
This is just hilarious to read and totally made me laugh! I don't have any critique for it, mostly because I see nothing wrong with it and I'm not comfortable ...
Aug 1, 2013 -
Re: If She Were Real
Wow. Powerful. Absolutely amazing. I don't know why this doesn't have more likes or other comments. This just really hit home for me. I usually let others take the wheel ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: Shawn/Cassie Excerpt
Hey, I'm Kev and I want to dive right into this review by saying that I really loved reading this piece! I connected with Shawn, and I felt nostalgic reading ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: The Escape
Hey, I'm Kev! Welcome to YWS and congrats on publishing your first piece! Let me start off by saying I loved the idea you had going for this: looming death ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: Unicorns Exist
First off just let me tell you that I love this to bits and pieces! I understand the meaning you were trying to convey. I loved the fact that even ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: Dim Lights
Hello! I'm Kev and here's my review on your (fantastic) work! Personally, I love stories set in the past. You picked an interesting era and one that could have been ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: True Beauty
Hey, I'm Kev and here's my input on your poem: As was stated in the review before mine, your poem was created with the best of intentions. It has no ...
Jul 30, 2013
