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Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Six (I)
I'm back again AriaAdams! Yet another amazing chapter, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I could find no mistakes, good job. I really like all your descriptions, especially the way the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Five (I)
Hello AriaAdams! Back once again! Another character change! And this time it's the son of an emperor that wanted the throne of the previously known king. I wonder how all ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Four (III)
Hello AriaAdams! Me again. I absolutely love the character change! From the prince, to a forest boy. I must keep reading, for this is one of my favorites. But I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Four (I)
Hello AriaAdams! I love it just as much as before, it gets clearer and clearer and clearer each chapter. I do not wish to stay long because part two of ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Three (II)
Dear AriaAdams, Wow! It's great that you have brought in a fight for the throne, if this prince does want the crown enough to kill three of his brothers, then ...
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Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Two
Hello AriaAdams, The suspense! It's killing me! I did find one minor error though: "not one of us of got" I think you should take out the last "of". That's ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter One
Wow! I have been eyeing this novel for quite some time, so I thought review day would be the perfect time to read all your work and review it! I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Dinner downstairs / Lunch
Hello Baesch! I like it! It explains all that you felt while you were out there. It almost seems cut short, but the feelings of the whole time are there. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 4: Darkness
I was so entranced by the book, that it only took me about a minute to read! I wish there were more chapters to read and review. I could find ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins
Wow! The suspense is killing me! I shall not stay for much longer on this review, just to congratulate you again on how amazing this book is, and to list ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 2: The Spell
Hello again ConfusedGlasses! Absolutely amazing! I absolutely love it! Although I did find one small mistake in your story. "embracing theses formerly loyal citizens," these? I don't know. I love ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 1: Enemies We Were, What Are We Now?
Hola ConfusedGlasses! I absolutely love it! I like that you added some mystery, I am eager to read the next chapters. I could find no flaws in this one. I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden
Hi mawpah! I loved it! Although it took me about five paragraphs to figure out that it was a comedy. I'm weird that way. “Oh, I’m sure you’ll do” That ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Part Two
Hello again ThereseCricket! I do believe that this chapter kept up the same quality as the last one! All though I do have one minor suggestion. Just a pointer, instead ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God, Pt. 1
Hello ThereseCricket! This may be a short review, but I find no flaw in you writing. So I can only congratulate you on how great it is! I do not ...
Jun 29, 2014