Kelpies

Hello Annaclare, I love it! Sort of dystopian, can't wait to read more! but eight years old? Not so sure about that. This just might work in real life, but ...

Hello kelsmore! This short is kind of sad. Sometimes, you can't help but fall into a pit dug by lies. I try my best not to, but sometimes we can't ...

Hello Baesch, I'm almost crying after reading this, I feel the emotion put into it. I know it's true, love leads to hurt. It almost always does. I have started ...

Hello yadanlaller (I hope I got your name right)! I like this piece, it's sad though, that they will never meet it seems. I sometimes just sleep so that I ...

Hello RoxieRain! I love this story! I had a dream very much like this once, but I never get the nerve to write about when I dream about the real ...

Hola Unique! *Playfully swats over the head. I like this! Freedom at last, only part I don't like is the part about stealing the motorcycle... But I'm pretty sure she's ...

I love it! And this really spoke to me because I believed that all hope for my team on review day was gone, even though I was still reviewing, I ...

Hello SaphireEyes! This poem is great! I'll bet that it is one of the best-worded poems I have ever read. How you say it all, it feels straight forward, yet, ...

Hello Holysocks! That's how I felt when I left! I had five glow-in-the-dark stars on the ceiling of my bedroom, and when we left I couldn't sleep because the pattern ...

This is beautiful! I love it! The emotion that pours through is that of one who has been there, asked those questions. I cannot fathom how much this poem means ...

I'm back Markontheworld! I like it! A moth? Butterfly? Not exactly sure. But this is just as imaginative as the others, and you made a cocoon with the words this ...

Hello Markontheworld! This is amazing! I like what you did with the words, making the outline of a tree. It is also quite meaningful. The whole life of the tree, ...

Hello AriaAdams, I can't stand the suspense! There is the labyrinth, the burning port, everything keeping him from his betrothed. I suspect that he will eventually find his way there. ...

Hello there AriaAdams! The quality of this chapter matches if not exceeds all the others. I cannot wait to see how this novel will turn out. It seems we are ...

Hello again AriaAdams, The suspense is killing me! The end of this magnificent chapter sent shivers down my spine. I wonder what (or who) started the fire? I cannot predict ...