Kelpies

Hello skorlir! This poem does actually seem to follow a pattern at points, but that's not always what I look for. I look for the meaning, which is quite apparent ...

Sorry I took so long I shall not dally long on this chapter, because another awaits. It's beauty has not diminished, if anything it has grown. No apparent errors were ...

Hello SportyWriter! This might help next time I spend hours on a piece, I'll just make sure that everything goes awri. I might write a nice poam, less than 75 ...

Hello Markontheword! This wasn't what I expected, but the ending clarified everything for me. I could find no errors, plus, it's a poem, if you changed much the flow would ...

Hello porcupinestrongwill, I just keep wondering, why is she having the fever? My only theory is that: Because her power is flame, when she gets too cold her body starts ...

Hello porcupinestrongwill, I want to punch that officer in the face. Seriously, like he could have done any better. You shouldn't complain about something unless you can find a solution ...

Hello r4p17! Like where the story is going... And RP seems like your average dwarf. I'll bet that they're just going to the mountains because they remind RP of home. ...

Hello yet again r4p17! I like where this story is going! I see a little bit of inspiration from "The Center of the Earth" Or something close to that. I ...

Hello again r4p17! Sorry , I had a laugh at your expense. This is well done! Can't wait to see the next chapter! I couldn't even find anything wrong with ...

Hello r4p17! I could barely contain my laughter when I realized what was going on. It's a great plot! I can't think of any place where it came from, other ...

Hello sisterluck! I really like it! At first I thought it would be like a beauty and the beast story, but this is way cooler! Having complete control of your ...

Hello magpie, I thought you could have made it longer... But this is great! Short and sweet. It sounds so real, and yet I've never heard it described quite this ...

Cancer... The chance is that I will have it, as so many others in my family have. Just recently, my surrogate grandmother suffered the same fate. My father's sister passed ...

Hello NatD, I have found one mistake, it's in your summary... I do believe that you said "hat" instead of "what". I honestly don't have any idea what the intention ...

Hello This is hilarious! *Likes*. Took me a while to understand the last one, but I eventually got it. I've read many Frozen fanfics, but this is by far the ...