Kelly-Vision

Very...Philosophical :P I couldn't stop laughing at "Love me tenderly, when I like it rough." XD This just cracked me up. I LOVE the impact that leaving "together" on it's ...

I liked it :D Didn't quite understand it but I didn't have to to appreciate it :D Only one thing to say, at the start of the poem the sentances ...

XD XD XD I cant stop laughing XD That was absolutley hilarious!Chinkie...Brilliant XD And Makin Her Be Tan and Blonde Is Brilliant XD Having Her Hate Her Parents Is Brilliant ...

You've done it again :lol: Bravo:P Loved it, as I loved the first chapter. I love the way you describe the culture of the elves; it is a very original ...

Not a review, just my opinion=D I liked it :D it was a very original take on things; a different persepctive. Love the rhyming scheme, dont know what it's called ...

I quite liked it :wink: It was very original and... I suppose the word is mesmerizing

FINISH IT! PLEASE POST MORE! I BEG OF YOU! Haha... I have to say, that was one of the most interesting stories I've read in ages! I can now call ...

I Loved It. Loved It Loved It Loved It. Honestly, i can't see anything wrong with it at all! I really hope you continue it, it's a side of the ...

I really enjoyed it ^^ Just watcht your structure and when people are saying things make sure you space them out so its not like "blah" "blah" You know?:P Apart ...

I Enjoyed It. It Was Short sweet and straight to the point. I may be wrong on this but i keptfeeling like you ere switching tenses a lot. Like going ...

I Really Enjoyed This. I found it quite believable and it really makes you want to read on ( would say page turner, but that isn't very literall haha) be ...