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Kazumi

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: i want to leave this place

    "tittle" "usefull" es ist lustig, wie der Kritiker nicht einmal eine der Grundformen des guten Schreibens richtig machen kann

    Sep 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: i want to leave this place

    "It's not my habit to critic" "my habit to critic" "to critic" "critic" *critique (*flies away*)

    Sep 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Forest File

    Limited to 500 words. If your goal in mind was a flash fiction, why not include a word count at the end of the story? It's a common practice for ...

    Sep 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Mirror's World Chapter One

    Oh, you can't get rid of Santa Clause. Santa Clause is everywhere in any language.

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Acacia

    welp, just get creative mang get summa dat brain power and create magic. it's under these tight constraints where talent truly shines, or at least begins to shine

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Other Re: The Daily Life of Nomaru-kun - Prologue: Normal life

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Other Re: The Daily Life of Nomaru-kun - Prologue: Normal life

    uguuu~

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: The War in Their Eyes

    reading how they are represented by the animal in ways that would trigger their scowls. in ways that would trigger their scowls. would trigger their trigger keyboard warriors incoming huheuehuehueheuh

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Dreamer

    btw ur welcome m8

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Dreamer

    I'll get my review on and explain why this shouldn't be labelled poetry, at least in this site.

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Dreamer

    this isn't poetry this is poetry in prose form

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    just woke up, found this gold pure gold mang

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Wow, is the flashfic really that vague, or is it just something that a specific group of people truly appreciate, or do I just suck?

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Actually, scratch that. Let me rephrase. In your opinion, what am I trying to tell the readers through this flashfic?

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    look at all those appositives Using an Italian-Spanish name that originated from Greek/Roman mythology in a Philippine setting sounds weird, no? Or is it? Also, there is a good reason ...

    Jun 26, 2016


My tongue must tell the anger of my heart, or else my heart, concealing it, will break...
— Katherine, The Taming of the Shrew