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Kazumi

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Hidden Entity - 3.4 - The Crater

    Hey there, Light. It’s ya boi awtbeyders, and I’m back with another review that I promised. So far I’ve read and reread these four chapters again and again, and I ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Hey Sacred, it's outvaders. I got some trivia to start us off: Elijah looked for God in the wind, but He was not there. Elijah then looked for God in ...

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Technology Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 1

    Hey there regis, it's outvaders. I'm just gonna come in real quick and review your chapter. I was planning to marathon this novel (or read all present chapters before reviewing ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 1.3 - Argument

    Hey there, Light. Here's one of the reviews I promised a long time ago. I hope you'll learn something new from it! Since this is the last part of the ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Praise the Lord

    yay a short one Hello there, just passing by for a short review for your equally short story. The issue I have with this story is that it's actually pretty ...

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Bholla Baj

    So the thing about this story that made me want to review it was the description. "Read at your own peril. It is too close to reality." Well, let's see ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: His Perfect Machine

    Pretty descriptions and dramatic-looking scenes aside, the story and its ending doesn't pack as much punch as it should. It feels sad, but why should I be sad? I think ...

    Feb 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Satire Re: ​Falling in love with Marry

    ok now this is a short enough piece for a late-night review Hey, I'm outvaders and I'm dropping by for a short review for this equally short story. It seems ...

    Feb 17, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Other Re: Accelerated Reader Is Bad

    Good morning, afternoon, or evening. Let's get right into the news. Lovely. An essay. We barely get to see any of these in YWS. A few things: -this essay is ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: our kingdom

    Let's get right into the news. A few noteworthy things: -There's the classic, starting line or question that YA books and young writers always use to intrigue the audience. -no ...

    Nov 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration

    Thought I was dead? Think again. Let's get right into the news. A few noteworthy things. -Classic intriguing starting line that young writers love to do so much -Malaysian setting. ...

    Nov 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Forest File

    Yes, more of them short stories. These things are severely underrated these days. Hello again, it's me. I'm pretty pleased to find an elusive short story under this haystack of ...

    Sep 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Mirror's World Chapter One

    entry-level YA chapters. groan. I think this chapter perfectly shows why I don't like to review YA chapters. But that's beside the point. Just a heads up: I will not ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Acacia

    Alright, so, let's get into the news. Spoiler alert: I will not be nice in this review. Mostly because it's part of my nature, but it's also attributed to my ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My One and Only Love

    has a meat-grinder exam the next day, hasn't done anything in the past nine hours, and has to go to bed soon decides to go to YWS So, yeah. Hello ...

    Aug 25, 2016


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