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Re: Hidden Entity - 3.4 - The Crater
Hey there, Light. It’s ya boi awtbeyders, and I’m back with another review that I promised. So far I’ve read and reread these four chapters again and again, and I ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
Hey Sacred, it's outvaders. I got some trivia to start us off: Elijah looked for God in the wind, but He was not there. Elijah then looked for God in ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 1
Hey there regis, it's outvaders. I'm just gonna come in real quick and review your chapter. I was planning to marathon this novel (or read all present chapters before reviewing ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 1.3 - Argument
Hey there, Light. Here's one of the reviews I promised a long time ago. I hope you'll learn something new from it! Since this is the last part of the ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Praise the Lord
yay a short one Hello there, just passing by for a short review for your equally short story. The issue I have with this story is that it's actually pretty ...
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Bholla Baj
So the thing about this story that made me want to review it was the description. "Read at your own peril. It is too close to reality." Well, let's see ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: His Perfect Machine
Pretty descriptions and dramatic-looking scenes aside, the story and its ending doesn't pack as much punch as it should. It feels sad, but why should I be sad? I think ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: Falling in love with Marry
ok now this is a short enough piece for a late-night review Hey, I'm outvaders and I'm dropping by for a short review for this equally short story. It seems ...
Feb 17, 2017 -
Re: Accelerated Reader Is Bad
Good morning, afternoon, or evening. Let's get right into the news. Lovely. An essay. We barely get to see any of these in YWS. A few things: -this essay is ...
Nov 30, 2016 -
Re: our kingdom
Let's get right into the news. A few noteworthy things: -There's the classic, starting line or question that YA books and young writers always use to intrigue the audience. -no ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration
Thought I was dead? Think again. Let's get right into the news. A few noteworthy things. -Classic intriguing starting line that young writers love to do so much -Malaysian setting. ...
Nov 19, 2016 -
Re: Forest File
Yes, more of them short stories. These things are severely underrated these days. Hello again, it's me. I'm pretty pleased to find an elusive short story under this haystack of ...
Sep 17, 2016 -
Re: Mirror's World Chapter One
entry-level YA chapters. groan. I think this chapter perfectly shows why I don't like to review YA chapters. But that's beside the point. Just a heads up: I will not ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Acacia
Alright, so, let's get into the news. Spoiler alert: I will not be nice in this review. Mostly because it's part of my nature, but it's also attributed to my ...
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: My One and Only Love
has a meat-grinder exam the next day, hasn't done anything in the past nine hours, and has to go to bed soon decides to go to YWS So, yeah. Hello ...
Aug 25, 2016
