Kaywiia

This was absolutely amazing. I love the pain and emotion in this. I also like that you didn't try to cover everything and hide it in a metaphor. I enjoyed ...

I love the form of this! It really looks amazing. that was the first thing that caught my eye here. I get where you were going with this, and I ...

I like this a lot. Normally I don't go for this type of poetry, but this was really good. Keep Writing! Kay

Okay, this has been nitpicked to death, so the only thing I can really say is that I love this. This is amazing for someone writing on writer's block. I ...

I love this whole thing. Since the others have nitpicked it to death, I'll just say I thought it was amazing. I loved the moral and the story. Keep Writing! ...

I really like this and I think all of your comparisons are very different and not at all cliché. This poem is very different from most of the ones I ...

I like this a lot. I think, howver, you might have had a typo in your first line: There's a black where there should be a beat, This doesn't make ...

I am not sure which I love more, your voice or the poem! You hit the high notes very well. However, I have a nitcpick. Use "'cause" instead of "coz". ...

I like scinerio one. I think that it would make a very interesting story, but I think this should be your own ideas that go into this. However, I love ...

I though this was hyseterical. I really don't have any nitpicks! Keep Writing, Kay

I liked the feel and imagery in this poem. Though you did warn about language, I don't feel like it adds to the piece in any way. I feel like ...

I love this poem I lot. I think the imagery is beautifully done. I would love to nit-pick it, but I really can't. Any issues I have were either fixed ...

I totally rewrote this, tell me what you think.

This should be the YWS theme song!!!

Ha, thanks so much guys. Anger, I changed my statement about the glove to clearify. Now it's: "She pulled her hand off the gate, the silk glove that protected her ...