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Re: I won't forget
Very good and vivid imagery :) You set the scene beautiful and i really really like this :) the second stanza, all of it is brilliant, it's as though we ...
Jun 1, 2012 -
Re: WIll Never Fall again.
Love it :D very empowering and vocal. I guess I like it because I can relate to it and i'd say I'm not the only one but even if I ...
Jun 1, 2012 -
Re: Another Day
I loved it :( :) Oh lord how I know how you feel!! And you potrayed it so beautifully you ledgend!! :D Ok first I like to think your world ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: New Beginnings
I really like the subject first off. I relate to it very well and if you read some of my poems you'll see why :P change is never easy and ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Meaningless
Ahiya :) Nice poem firstly :) Easy to read and i'm tired! So simple and sweet, but personal by bringing in your mothers pearls mentioned. I like how its a ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
Always a hard question But probably the catcher in the rye by J.D. Salinger, brilliant. I don't know why I even like it so much when everyone I've recommended it ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Why You, As You Say, Lost Everything
HI :) Well written for five minutes my friend, read over it again though. All in all I liked it but it doesnt flow as well as it should in ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 6)
Short but I like how somethings finally happening, the build ups dying down and somethings happening, I'm really intrested to see where this goes expecially with the schizophrenia angle, makes ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 5)
Hmmm I found this chapter very different from your previous, I like it and found it easier to read (not that the others were hard to read) I like this ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Five years to go.
Really powerful easy to read poem, I like it. I love the emotion and how it's simply like your talking to your sister (persuming this is true that is) and ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Yet another love poem
Very sweet :) So easy nd so simple, I liked it. Short poems are often the best ones, you didn'd drag on just said how you felt, it's honest and ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 2)
I like this chapter more than the last one, its less of a rant and easier to read. It's as though he's calmed down. For the world is smothered with ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 1)
Ahiya there Aj :) First off all can i ask you, what age is this guy? And is there actually something up with him or is he just the average ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Best Friends
I love this, my best friends moving away in a few weeks and everything in this poem reminds me off her because its all so true, she's always the one ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Embracing Summer
oooh this is so pretty :) so so cute! The glow of a fire,that warms me right through;all this I am holding,when I hold on to you. Thats unbelievable romantic ...
Aug 10, 2011
