KathrynLane

Hey, amazing poem :) the language was top-notch (lol.... Top-notch) and the grammar was perfecto. I didn't really get how you put Xs at the start of some of the ...

This is really interesting :) I love how you've taken something thats pretty boring and ordinary, and made a spectacular poem out of it :) I really liked the imagery ...

Amazing poem!!! You wrote with so much feeling, it was beautiful :) most of the lines were pretty much perfect, but there was one :"On to greater things than dust," ...

Hahahaa Mr cuddle poo poo :D awesome name for a gerbil! Anywayyyy.... This was an awesome story! The characters were really fleshed out, which is nice to see :) you ...

Hi :) This was really poetic, which I liked :) your choice of words was amazing, it really put a picture in your mind. It didn't really have a lot ...

Great poem! I agree with RoxieRain, there is so much truth in this, which is frankly really sad. The line; "stop thinking about height and width, and start thinking about ...

This was awesome :D you added just the right touch of humor to make it funny, but not overdone! I particulary liked the first stanza (is that what you call ...

This is a beautiful poem!! The imagery is amazing, I found that especially with the first couple of lines, you could really envision the lady walking along the lake with ...

This is an amazing poem!! The language you used is just... words can not describe how beautiful it is :) I'm no poet, but I can see a good poem ...