KatTrain

First of all, do not fret about the way you've structured your poem! This is called freestyle poetry, meaning that you can format it however you like. There are, however ...

Tell me how you feel, Tell me if what we had was ever real. Eee, you started off with a cliche Because now, you're not what you were. Everything we ...

In the silent darkness, that blanketed the night, delete the comma Death held out a hand, and walked with you a while. His fo r lorn, somber air, cloaked with ...

Before you read this poem, beautiful, This sounds kind of cheesy with the 'beautiful' on the end I’d like you to say ‘yes’. I thank you very much if you ...

First off, Make the pictures smaller, they're difficult to read and would be more effective when visible all in one row. Now, onward to the poem! If I were to ...

I wonder the hallways of gossip. , comma instead. Add an adjective before or after the 'the', There are words like her and he. 'there are' seem really plain and ...

in the death of Capitalize 'in'. Bring 'time' up back into the first line time, we wake. and in the shade of seas, 'and' seems like it's stuck in there ...

The Artist and His brush Just want to state that right from the get-go, I liked the title I am a tool who’s guided by An Artist’s genius Hand . ...

I know your afraid comma here for dramatic emphasis I see you. i think a comma would work better here sine you're continuing the thought in the following lines Curled ...

This should probably be in the 'song lyrics' section, but I'll review it as a poem. The ideas in this poem are great. I loved the comment about the 'drug ...

If I wer e a car comma I'd be the fuel Moving the engine (stanza 1^) i capitalize f i were a plane comma i"d be the propeller pushing it ...

Dry; Drier than my chapped lips i dislike the repetition, it doesn't sound 'beautiful' like poetry should That burn when I run my tongue over them, get rid of the ...

Palindromic memories meandered from the blue cello's plangent, hollow heart. The first two lines are perfect, I wouldn't change a thing. The warmth of anonymous listeners regaled I don't think ...

scrape the shavings of my heart use a synonym for 'heart'. It'll sound less cliche. Love the imagery though. from under your fingernails, you clawed from the inside of your ...

Liar, Liar on the wall, Who’s the fairest of them all? Flattering, praising words for me, Yet behind your eyes, it apostrophe here s hate I see. I think the ...