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Re: Camp Enemy Ch.2
Yay! Thank you ^_^
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Camp Enemy
Thanks!
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter One
Yay! I love Warrior Cats! :-D
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Canvas of Life
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Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Two: Episode 23, Flare
(throws up at sight of pokemon)
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter One: The Beginning of Our Quest
I think the paragraph launched into it; I often find myself doing that and have to correct it. You need to engage your readers more; let them find more about ...
Sep 20, 2014 -
Re: Why is she crying?
...... Well-- I don't really understand why you posted this in the first place-- I'm not trying to be mean or anything; I promise. It was average, just there wasn't ...
Sep 14, 2014 -
Re: tough guy
............ Uhmmm ok. No offense-- but I don't really understand why you wrote this in the first place.
Sep 13, 2014 - Re: Sydick Sep 13, 2014
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Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue (Rewrite)
Well.. it's nicely detailed. I just scanned it though, but I've read a couple of paragraphs, not to be offensive or anything but I thought it was a little too ...
Sep 13, 2014