Karzkin

Hey Jash, your lyrics are great. However, I feel I have a few things to say about your music. It too is very good, but there is still room for ...

Hello EvensLily. I'm sorry to say, but I did not like this piece. Reasons are given forthwith: First, your rhyming. A lot of people on YWS say "don't rhyme, it ...

I'm a massive fan of haiku, and I'm prepared to say these are some of the best I've seen here. First, the good stuff. 1. Most of your kigo are ...

Hi! A good piece, I enjoyed it. I especially liked the refrain throughout. It adds to the heavy message of the piece. The repetition of the first line at the ...

Hello! Review time. A nice idea for a piece. An interesting theme overall, but not too much information, it leaves things to the audience's imagination. There are a few technical ...

This is a better piece than your one about the raindrops. A much better, more interesting topic. You had some really good lines in there too. Some good allusions and ...

This was nice. I could say something about punctuation, but I'm sure you can work it out for yourself, so I won't. Raindrops on the window pane is a pretty ...

Hello there. As many have already said, well done on sharing something personal. Your resolve is commendable. The content of this piece is good. A touchy subject, but you've succeeded ...

Hi :) Great piece. Fabulous message and composition. I liked the repetition of 'even with you gone'. Without the transcription (which I haven't yet been bothered to write out myself) ...

I'm sure you don't need me to remind you how brilliant you are, but I think I will anyway. This piece is fabulous. Look what happens when you have a ...

Em, this is great! Another top effort. I particularly relished the first and third stanzas. Your little elf must have truly been an amazing creature. One suggestion I do have ...

Hello there :) A good second offering, I think. An interesting topic. I think it's very easy to write with vitriol. Bitterness is a key flavour of any good poem. ...

Hi Amelia, here is my review, as promised. First, well done on attempting a haiku. I find they're rather tricky to get right. To some of the other reviewers here, ...

This is great. I often eschew free verse, but I really enjoyed it. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. Some particularly inspired lines there. Great concept, and good execution A ...

Hi Em, I still love this piece as much as I did when you showed me last week. Even more so now that you've cleared up that one ambiguous line. ...