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It didn't really move me, I thought it was slightly detatched, and so I thought this was not very emotional, although you do have some things in there, such as ...

I liked it a lot, my only problem was the line "Where told was tales" I think it should be "Where told were tales" but that's only my little pet ...

Oh, har de har har har.... That was sarcasm.. but, I HOPE this is a typo: wanted to play a game he had never heard of.

Hey, Zellie! Haha! So you finally began posting here! I win! *maniacal laughter* *hem*, sorry... I think that the letters got sort of scrambled you should have it bold where ...

I agree, the elliseswere sort of weird, but otherwise it was the perfect girl-meets-boy, girl-falls-in-love-with-boy, boy-falls-in-love-with-girl, happily ever after story.

I think it is good, but are you talking about a pyromaniac.

Thanks a lot... yeah... I thhinkk a lot when I surf. I just came backk from surfing again as it happens... yea. Its awesome!

Yeah... sorry about the mess-up on the 1st one. But, thanks for all the compliments about my haikus, they were he first four I've ever written.

I liked it, but don't get to expect compliments like this..... expect MORE! Muahahahahaha :twisted:

I liked it a lot!

I liked it a lot!

II like it... ut they just met. Kinda weird. Also , the arroma of bacon and eggs isn't sweet.

It's a wall of words and almost impossible to read. Ever heard of paragraphing? I agree. Also, your latest post has he same problem. I couldn't even read it because ...

Yep... thanx for the pointers and no, IT IS NOT A HOMOSEXUAL ROMANCE NOVEL!! sorry. had to get that out of my system :D

Wow.... I'm amazed. That was awesome!