KaribbeanDiva

hi, hi... what can i say beside fantastic writting? your writting was properly punctuated, there were a few poetic devices and everything seemed perfect. well done... I encourage you to ...

Hi, Hi... I will get straight to the point! i didn't read your poem one reason... No punctuation whats up with that? Here is some important things to adhere to:- ...

Hi, hi... My dear, i loved those lyrics, i love the way how it was punctuated, those lyrics had rythem you were feeling the vibes when you read those lyrics... ...

Hi, Hi... Bleeding Rose your poem is really touching, but i must say it has no rythem... The following advice will help you in getting rythem into your poem. Punctuation ...

hi, hi. you have done a fantastic job... But when writing songs punctuation is key, it tells the singer when to pause when to stop etc. These are some things ...

Hi, Hi. I am Karibbean Diva, and i am pleased to comment on your work. I know that that you are a writter and that you may not listen to ...

Hi,Hi. Karibbeandiva here please to comment on your work. I really love your topic I must say! when I opened your poem i was eager to read it but i ...

Who, threw the rock, that landed, on Jim? the quote above should be: Who threw the rock, that landed on Jim? Its a question right? The rock, whose jagged edges, ...

hi,hi, I am Karibbean diva, i had liked your poen it was short and sweet. I have found a couple of issues with your poem, well i like to call ...

My favoyrite part was, (quoted bellow) Days and Nights, I searched in vain. Every step I took, taken in pain. Yet I feel that all this pain will yield no ...

touching, i enjoyed reading your poem. And yes i have lost a soulmate, but in a diffrent way. its sad to say, but it just had to happen that way. ...

Hey Desmerize! i enjoyed reading you poem, it was so touching, this poem reached home and i liked. by now you should know why i am being sarcastic about this. ...

Hi timeline, i am Karibbean Diva. Your poem was ok, but not excllent, To me it was one line it had little punctuations, A dull flood of crimson paint Flows ...

you my friend are talented this story was great, i was flowing, and every thing like that. the only problem i has is that i finds it too spaced out ...

"bravo, bravo, bravo, lyric to kill" is what we will call that in my country. i love the flow of this poem, this could be turned into a song or ...