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Re: Better Days Ch.1
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, I love this story so far. It's pretty good, there are just some little bit of errors that need a-fixin'.. Nitpicks: ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling on my Face.
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I really like this poem. It's interesting and new, and I certainly love the title. It kind of made me laugh a ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Removed
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I like this chapter so far. It has drama and answered questions people wanted to know. Onto nitpicking: Okay, I only saw ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: My Veil of Lies
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, it is nice of a story. It really is. I love how the main character sacrificed her beliefs for her parents ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Does It Hurt?
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. All I can say is wow. This story can intense quick. I like it, as you may have guessed, but that escalated ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Remorse
Hello. Kanome here with a short review for you. This has made me sad :c I don't know what true love is either because I have never experienced it. I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Wheels of Freedom
Hello. Kanome here with a short review for you. I love this story, like a lot. It's sweet and interesting to me. I know how it feels to live in ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Our love was black and white
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I really really love this poem. You put it in a way that you talked about love, but the piano symbolized that ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Block
Hello. Kanome here with a review. First of all, I love the formatting of this poem. This is the first time I've seen it all day today. Secondly, this poem ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: John's Quest~Chapter Two
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, this is a good chapter so far, but what is the name of this story? All I see is Chapter One ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Man with the Silver Crest
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, this poem is really good, but I think you should fix some mistakes (just a few... not a whole lot.) In ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Awe Chapter One; The Wormhole
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, I like this so far. It's interesting and fresh. Onto nitpicking..... Okay, I think there should be a comma right here ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 4 *Edited*
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I like this chapter so far. I haven't read the other chapters yet, but I will when I get the chance to. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination chapter 7 {editing}
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, I really like this chapter of your story. I honestly haven't read the beginning to here, but I can tell a ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 10 Part 3
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Well, I personally like this chapter. Even though I don't really know what it's about, I believe you have made a great ...
Jun 29, 2014