Kamas

Hawkieeeee *tackles* Hai ^_____________^ This was so good dear! I really liked it!! The emotion you put in this is just so well done. The feeling this Aryll is feeling ...

Oh my deary goodness! I gets to rant :OOOO Yay!! I read Twilight long before it became a trend. Like loooonnnnggg before. So I believe to have a stronger uninfluenced ...

Hi there! I'm Kamas. I don't usually review stories but I heard your work has been untouched for two weeks! I felt bad so I came! And here I am ...

Hi there Ayumi! I'm Kamas here to review. This is a sweet, short little poem I enjoyed. Somethings to fix ya, but I liked its nursery rhyme sort of feel. ...

Hi there Jojo48. I'm Kamas! Here to review. Now I thought this poem was nice but there are some things I believe you should fix up. Winter is a sketch ...

This sounds interesting Abigail. though it isn't the type of book I'm into, I'd totally try to read this. If you enjoy that kind of thing I recomend : Bliss ...

freedom locked in a cage of gold and diamonds oblivious to the voices of those who died trying to find them i see others souring free above clouds in the ...

Stella!! *jumps on and tacklesnuggleloves* Since you already seem to have confidence issues with poetry I'll try to be nice ^^ Now! Structure/Writing Technique: I found this interesting. A poem ...

Oh my god James..... That is possibly the sweetest thing I have ever read. *sniffles and recovers* it was just goregous! *stares at her own modest, uninteresting poetry* I owe ...

Hey there! I'm Kamas! This is an interesting poem The message is cliched but you wrote it well. I don't have much time so this will be very basic. A ...

Hi there! I'm Kamas and I'll be your reviewer! Brace yourself I tend to get a little over detailed But this is a nice poem I love the idea, and ...

Hello there! I'm Kamas and I shall review your little poem! This poem is simple but there are some things that need to be looked over 1. Grammar Flower is ...

Heya Lil'Feather! I'm Kamas and I'll be reviewing your work today! This is a nice poem here! I quite enjoyed it! There are some thing to work on though which ...

Hey there bryanne! I'm Kamas and i will being your reviewer today! This was a sweet little poem but it was to short for my liking! Expand it! Make it ...

Heya Livybmee! I'm Kamas and (if I may) I will be your reviewer. This is an interesting poem with an original idea but there are some thing you have to ...