Kamas

Hey WD! *hands over cookie* I'm finally here, though I don't know what to tell you after all these great reviews. So I'll ignore them and just tell you what ...

Well, I owe you one. So I'll review while I'm here. (AN: I think writing good short poetry is one of the most difficult aspects of writing poetry in general. ...

Oaky, I'm finally here Tiger. :D Now I thought this was cute, I like the almost rhyme you had going. It worked for you and created a great flow. Now, ...

Hi Melvin. I have one suggestion for you. If you want people to appreciate your poem more, I would but a translation underneath. I would love to review this poem, ...

:D Hi there bud. Now as requested: Hail, in the shape of metal shards rain down upon me Scrambling to my feet I try to move away, Like a mouse, ...

Hi there Critiq! I'm going to give you a little hand with this poem. Now it's original, and quite impressive how long you go on about fruit. :wink: But your ...

That. Was. Beautiful. *bawls* You are fantastic my dear Amizzle. Just fantastic. So hilarious I'm not even going to review this. Though I will star it in hopes it will ...

Connie, Now this is much, much, much better then your other poem. I really did enjoy this one. The image you created was just lovely. Now, there are larger issues ...

Well Connie, sorry it took me so long to get here. Five bootsteps is five more to the goal Five footfalls more makes the distance closer But what is five ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS! I'm Kamas, going to give you a quick review. Well there isn't much to review here. I feel the rhyme is immature and really takes ...

Hiya Katharsis! I'm Kamas, here to be your reviewer today. Now this is really a poem that impressed me. An adult longing for their childhood/youth. Very well done, I must ...

Hi Skings! This is quite cute, I must say! I don't really have much to say about it, maybe extend it a bit. Add a stanza, about, possibly pushing? Since ...

I haven't heard of this book or the Twilight guy as a matter of a fact. Sounds interesting: There are some reviews sparsely spread through the internet, so I must ...

Hi Loveless. Quite a nice piece, for flow it's really well done. I must admit it's really great. It's a little too short to give you a very long review. ...

Hi babygirl! Well I don't think this would count as a poem. More of a quote, which should be placed in the Literary Misc. Forum. Quick mention: There is a ...