Young Writers Society

See, I told you I'd get to this eventually. Thank you for finally posting this. Alright, dear, I won't crucify you for your weird enjambement since I know you're aware ...

Hi Audy, I'm so sorry this is so late, it's been a busy couple days. Thank you very much for your comments on my poem. Ehhh, I'm a little torn. ...

Hi JCK, sorry I didn't get to this sooner. the repetition of this poem does have the effect you want it to have. It should have made a lasting impact ...

Only because you asked so nicely, (I'm sorry I'm so late on this) taking the poem I know you did and looking at it in comparison. You haven't done well ...

Hey Karzkin, as kindly requested: I do like your poetry, it's motivated and pushing forward so it reads really quite well. However, it lacks the imagery it needs to prop ...

Lumi, two features, you fancy huh? I enjoyed this more then your other featured, in fact this is probably a favourite of yours. It's personable and quirky without highlighting that ...

Hey Teresa, Before I even read the poem, let me say: So, I suck at rhyming. But I love poetry. That is why I write prose poetry. It's my first ...

Hi there Horizon, Criticism is welcome, I wish to improve. This is a writing forum, after all, is it not Indeed it is, but if you're posting here it means ...

Lumi darling, perhaps you didn't make your edit sweep. But nonetheless, I shall stink up this thread with my early arrival. However morbid, this was enjoyable to read. And really ...

Hi Idraax, as requested I am here :0 Now for a short poem, this is fine and dandy but it's not very interesting. It's giving away so much, but not ...

K., You have some nice substance here, and yet you fall trap to your clear infatuation with description. Sweeney said to me, "A lot of words are spoken here, But ...

Pepper, as Perdido said, the first stanza is flailing - unsure of its point, its purpose. It's a stanza that you often see in writing, the inch in, it gives ...

Hi Earendil. Best 9/11 tribute I've seen on this site. It's humble and refuses to sensationalize the entire experience. But be careful with this kind of length, it's very short ...

Hi Kylan. you can shoot me later. I've been meaning to do this but I'm going to keep it brief. This is by far one of your more interesting pieces. ...

Hi Perdido, I shall keep myself at respectable distance as I'm not familiar with your story, or lots of your poetry or Norwegian Wood (though Murakami is wonderful). I thought ...