Kalliope

Aloa SimonCowellLuver, you start you song off with the line 'Nobody cares about me' and then you go on talking about how unfair life is to you (the lyrical I ...

Hey elephantwalrus, after reading through this once, I can say that I think it's a cute story, but it's just a little much in most places... which makes it a ...

Hey Rieda, I really liked this. It has a lovely flow, a clear message and even though this topic has been written about a million times I find it special. ...

Hey BBB :) , 1) Are the characters credible? Do they need some fleshing out? I think your characters quite solid and well developed. Ray seems to have a very ...

Hey summergrl13 :) , Alicia raced through the cafeteria doors and turned the corner. That was so stupid of me! Why'd I have to be that shy? she thought angrily ...

Hii there :) , absolutely lovely. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!! I also noticed about the tense think, but I'm sure you'll figure it out. Ich hoffe ...

Hello Heatherish, I simply love this. I guessed that Tia was the one who was moving in next door even before I read it was werewolves, but the kiss absolutely ...

Hey Heatherish, I am absolutely in love with this!! Really it's AWSOME! It's wonderfully written and you capture the moments and feeling so well, it's just... wow . I really ...

Hii Heatherish, I absolutely adored this and I am totally hooked. I think most of the things I noticed was already pointed out, but I have one or two things ...

Hey Yoyo, I also like this a lot, but it did remind me of twilight... Just the whole way he is cold, but beautiful. His face looked as if it ...

Hi :) As Dylan left for Algebra, his soul seemed to feel lighter than it had all morning. When he arrived in Ms. Willowash's room, it seemed a more blissful, ...

Hey, this is cute :) I think I'll be following this. And yes, this is so 8th grade. Her feet wouldn't move though, despite her will to run, so she ...

Hey Alice, I like this one :) Here are some peanuts ;) : I’m in a hole I’m holding onto the only thing that I can. If I let go, ...

Hey there! Writing a song about friendship is always great :) First of all, as Alainna already pointed out, you need to change some of the 'are's to 'our's: #1) ...

Hey Kadie, you absolutely saved my day with this! Now I feel all fuzzy inside. I don't feel like going through this again and spoiling the fun of it by ...