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Thanks for the reviews. This should be, "To my Love I have never met..."? See, the question mark is outside the quotation marks. ^.^ There's actually a couple of reasons ...

Thanks you two. :D @Nate - Now that you mention it, I think periods would work better. *putters off to change them*

Juni! :D So glad you liked. I am more of a novelist, but poetry is one of my first literary loves, and I enjoy writing it. It does wonders for ...

Thanks, everyone, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Once you picked up speed in seeing the mistakes riddling the narrative, I think you kinda bulldozed some things which could have been given the benefit of doubt. Like what ...

Thanks for the review, AquaMarine. :D The dark humor was definitely supposed to be present; it's practically the reason I wrote this in the first place. XD I think I ...

Thank you, everyone, for the feedback. :D @silented1 - Considering that how the brother treats their sister is the main source of conflict, I felt that focusing on it was ...

If I'm saying I'm a crazy girl and a pitiful artist why not have a wacky rhyme? That makes sense. :D

I'm glad you both enjoyed it so much. :D @empress - That metaphor took a life of its own. XD But I liked it, and it worked well, so I ...

Glad you enjoyed it so much. :D As for your questions: The who is covered in these lines: a crime where the perpetrator, the victim, the judge and jury, are ...

@Light_Devil! - I'm glad you enjoyed it. The colons were deliberately placed; I was going more for a prompt-and-response format than a list. @Galerius - Ouch. While you bring up ...

Oh my lord! How did i get on the featured works list? Is it based on how many views you have, or what? It's based on how many people gave ...

In that case, you should include an explanation at the end of the story. I completely missed it. XD

Thanks everyone. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. :D My problem with this is that it seems more like the beginning to something bigger rather than a short and sweet ...

Thanks everyone for the comments. You don't have to be afraid to tear it apart; that's why I posted it here, after all. :P As for the confusing bit, I've ...