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Hello, there. You might want to get around to reviewing other members' works. It'll not only get you more reviews in turn, but it's good practice for your own writing. ...

I agree with KAH; this poem ended on a very strong note, which was great. However, I did have to force myself to read this poem through. Part of this ...

fade away with tomorrow Watch your spelling. Because of this, I'm not sure if you meant "morning" rather than "mourning". Judging from the meaning of the poem, "mourning" seems to ...

Hey there. As Snoink already mentioned, you need to be a little more careful with your meter. Right now, the syllables of each rhyming line don't match up, and so ...

I really like the idea behind this poem, and I mean really, truly like it. The title is what caught my eye in the list of new literary works. I ...

That was hilarious and really well done. It's been ages since I've read "A Tale of Two Cities", and now you've got me wanting to read it right now. XD ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS. You may want to get around to reviewing other users' works. This will get you more reviews and the points you need to post more ...

You have some interesting and unique imagery here, which is great. Unfortunately, you have so much of it at once that it all melds together into a mess of imagery, ...

This poem was truly lovely, and your imagery, though simple and familiar, was strong and not cliche. I really enjoyed it. There were two things that stood out to me: ...

Shinning. Reflecting. A stain. The pain. I believe you want "shining". This poem struck me as very disjointed, in the confusing way. I have no clue where "Henceforth visitors" came ...

One thing that caught my eye right off the bat was that the first letter of every line is capitalized. I think this poem would be much stronger if this ...

This was very short and not very poetic. It reads more like a description of the symptoms of death rather than a poem about death. Basically, it's too literal, and ...

I like how you tied in the feelings of nostalgia to the hammock and the trees. It was a good use of imagery, and it really made those nostalgic feelings ...

This was very short, which wasn't a bad thing at all. I actually liked how this poem was so brief, and how the last stanza tied into the first. I ...

my blood, my come Wrong "come". This was very disjointed, and it took me a second read through to realize what you were writing about. It's not a bad thing ...