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Kaity

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shapely

    Hello(: Kaity here to do a review(: For your first shaped poem it was very well written! Although I'm not quite sure what shape it is meant to be. But ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Listening to a heartbeart

    Hello(: Kaity here to review! First off I think this describes the feeling we all crave perfectly. It's short and sweet and captures the essence of love in it's simplest ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Label me

    Hello(: Kaity here for a review! First off I wanted to say that everything you just explained is so ridiculously true. I have written pieces on this subject as well ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The Loudest Kind of Silence

    I have insomnia and I can definitely relate to that! Your writing is simple, yet very powerful! I love your arrangement, and I didn't find any grammatical errors. I really ...

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Seas within shells

    Before reading this, I wasn't expecting much because you said it was "rough" in the description. However, I think this is pure perfection! You make so many references, and your ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Live in the moment

    In just a few paragraphs, you have made me completely re-think the way I live my life. Its a very powerful story, with such a great plot line! It reminds ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Why

    That was incredible! Although this is terrible to admit, I love that it didn't have the happy ending most stories do! The love between the two was obvious, incredible, and ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Moses

    My father was an addict, and so it was kind of an emotional thing to read about what life actually might have been like for him. The way you tell ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Puzzle

    I think that is one of my favorite poems I have ever read! I love the puzzle piece metaphor! It perfectly illustrates the feeling of being different or not fitting ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken

    That poem is amazing! Although its sort of dark and gloomy, I think it somehow symbolizes hope for better days. I think that throughout the poem, each line has a ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: .the backwards tale of a broken dreaM

    That's a really touching poem! I love the way it started off in a darker mood, referring to death, and ended with awakening in the arms of a lover I ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Dear Sarah...

    I can really relate to that story. I have been in that situation many times myself! I really love that you ended it on a happy not though! It gave ...

    Dec 5, 2013


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart