Kaia

Greetings to the odd fellow in the helmet holding all the corndogs! Kaia here to leave you a review. First off, I want to say that the conversations you use ...

I have to say this was pretty silly, but it did put a smile on my face. I imagine a very tired, overworked writer putting these disconnected thoughts on paper ...

Greetings to yuh, Rinisha! WHOA!!!! Suddenly, I feel like I'm reading a novel off the shelf in a library. This is awesome! Your descriptions here are amazing! I can almost ...

Hey, Rinisha! Here to write a review (and get some points *evil grin*) So, this kind of looks like a prologue. It's a desperate letter by an urgent mother willing ...

Wow! Beautiful poem. It brings back beautiful memories of my past visits to beaches. I love the rhythm you use here. It sets the poem up for such a beautiful ...

Wow! You get right to the action. Wonderful job! I also want to point out that you did a good job with introducing the magic right away. A lot of ...

Okay, this is just awesome. I'm not a Netflix fan. In fact, as far as I remember, I've never even watched Netflix. BUT, I've watched movies and in all honesty, ...

Well, well, well, here is THE Kaia Jersaga to leave you a reveiw.;) First off, sorry for not being active on YWS in a bit. I haven't really dropped off ...

And suddenly the plot heightens! Good job! Another intriguing chapter is here. This is a really interesting combination of ancient legends, and I especially love how you show that the ...

First off, wow! This is really fascinating! I'm very confused but in a good way, as I expect in the next few parts things will get explained. I felt that ...

This is far more than a poem. Generally, no rhythm and no rhyme bother me. But, here, it flows so nicely without them. There is no need for capitalization; the ...

Greetings! Such a short poem conveys such deep feeling. It has many meanings. But I think anyone can relate to at some point in their lives feeling like they're a ...

Heyo! I'm not sure how you keep coming out with new pieces of writing so fast. It's like you can sleep and write at the same time. (A talent I ...

Hi! First off, I want to say, good job with the writing! Your characters are so sweet, and I love their names especially Isenna. Did you come up with that ...

Wow, I like how much cultural information you put in this! Clearly, you either did significant research or are familiar with your topic. Your descriptions of poverty are supreme and ...