Young Writers Society

Wow! Beautiful poem. It brings back beautiful memories of my past visits to beaches. I love the rhythm you use here. It sets the poem up for such a beautiful ...

Wow! You get right to the action. Wonderful job! I also want to point out that you did a good job with introducing the magic right away. A lot of ...

Okay, this is just awesome. I'm not a Netflix fan. In fact, as far as I remember, I've never even watched Netflix. BUT, I've watched movies and in all honesty, ...

Well, well, well, here is THE Kaia Jersaga to leave you a reveiw.;) First off, sorry for not being active on YWS in a bit. I haven't really dropped off ...

And suddenly the plot heightens! Good job! Another intriguing chapter is here. This is a really interesting combination of ancient legends, and I especially love how you show that the ...

First off, wow! This is really fascinating! I'm very confused but in a good way, as I expect in the next few parts things will get explained. I felt that ...

This is far more than a poem. Generally, no rhythm and no rhyme bother me. But, here, it flows so nicely without them. There is no need for capitalization; the ...

Greetings! Such a short poem conveys such deep feeling. It has many meanings. But I think anyone can relate to at some point in their lives feeling like they're a ...

Heyo! I'm not sure how you keep coming out with new pieces of writing so fast. It's like you can sleep and write at the same time. (A talent I ...

Hi! First off, I want to say, good job with the writing! Your characters are so sweet, and I love their names especially Isenna. Did you come up with that ...

Wow, I like how much cultural information you put in this! Clearly, you either did significant research or are familiar with your topic. Your descriptions of poverty are supreme and ...

Beautiful descriptions here. You definitely hit on the emotional stress of living a double life-a beautiful actress for everyone to watch and marvel at and also a abandoned mother. Yet, ...

Interesting. I love how disappointed Rei is when he realizes that the police didn't find his other victims. And now he has to prove that he's killed so many more ...

You definitely gave this some thought. Rei becomes an interesting character within a few lines of your writing. He's obviously evil and interested in revenge and murder. He seems to ...

Ant attack! I love it! There's an ant problem where I live, and I know just what your talking about. I like how you blend the annoyance of having the ...