Kafkaescence

Yo, this was a bit hard to follow. It seemed vaguely Chekhovian (don't know if that's what you were going for), but the dialog was overly stilted and there were ...

Really quick, reading this a second time also, with some knowledge about what your purpose is with the piece, I totally picked up on some metaphorical intricacies I missed the ...

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*And when I say that things should be fleshed out, do not make the mistake of equating this with greater length. I am simply advocating greater efficiency.

A final thought: perhaps the entirety of life, rather than a few select days, could be likened more appropriately to an unfinished crossword. Despite the fact that this at first ...

Even Google isn't helping me decipher all this jargon, so this piece makes next to no sense to me. If this is intended to be a companion to a story ...

Poems are meant to be looked at deeply! After all, a poem should be more than a collection of pretty words.

tl;dr

sure thing.

This was too long to edit, so I'm not able to fix it, but that first bit answering your question was supposed to be headed by a 1.

Yeah, I just noticed the title lol. I was actually almost going to ask you if this was an ode to someone, because it had that vibe.

Thanks for the comment.

Wow, I disagree. The vampire romance genre is overplayed, but to describe it as the hangman of contemporary literature seems a bit much. Look up from your Charles Dickens for ...

Thanks for the comment!

no problem. yeah, and the reader can usually tell by what the characters are saying, how they're saying it. it's a concision thing. the less words you use to describe ...