Kaedee

Welcome to YWS, Madeline...I have a feeling that you'll like it here! First off, I have a question. So is this chapter one? A prologue? What exactly is it? You ...

Hey, Liana, welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. Yes, I think this is the type of thing you would post in a blog. So perhaps you should start one and post ...

Hey, Quetseli. Kaedee here to review! Since this is short (which is not a problem at all), I'm not going to review this my normal way. This prologue was written ...

Hey, MysteryWriter, welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. Forest covered all the nitpicks, so I'm going to leave that part alone for now. I'm going to suggest a few things: -I ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee, here to review your work today. I read this yesterday! I don't have a problem with long pieces as long as you don't...have to...plow...through them. Which you... ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. *waves* Here are some corrections for you. Okay. I see you used the special Quote button for your dialogue...that's not what it's for! :) People ...

Hi Kayay, it's Kaedee, here to review again. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I'm getting to like the characters very much, especially the Mistress's character...your friend has done ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee. So I guess I'm here to 'tell you if it sucks or not'. :) So... I don't think it sucks at all! The idea is in multiple ...

I'm back, TTT! Can I call you that? I hope that's OK. Now, let's get to work. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I loved how you put in ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee and I'll be reviewing your work today! OK, let's start. *rubs hands together* Things I Like/Things You Did Well On -This was fun to read! -Anybody can ...

Hey, my name's Kaedee, and I'll being reviewing this piece today! Corrections/Nit-Picks: Here are some corrections for you! It seems that you spent most of this chapter explaining about the ...

Hey its Kaedee, here to review! You did pretty well on the first few paragraphs. I liked them. They were very interesting, but the last two paragraphs were confusing. Here ...

Hey, it's me again.(: I would consider putting multiple chapters together, because it will give us more to review! Nothing more really happened in this chapter. The story did not ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee. This was very well written! I loved the description of the Mistress: I sighed and looked up, too. The representation of the Mistress was actually quite accurate. ...

Hey, jasminebells...this was so funny and entertaining to read! You talk about things that anybody who is a teenager or had been a teenager can relate to. I loved how ...