KLovelace

Oh. Hello, K here to review your poem! First, I really like the idea of it. The subject matter, and then how it ends mid-word. That is truly a smart ...

Hello, K here to review! I hope this is helpful! I'm going to go line by line first, to show you places that might need a little work. First, there's ...

Oh.. K here to review your poem! I hope this is helpful! First, let's begin with your strengths. The first big one is being able to show a scene through ...

Hello, K here to review your poem! First, I'll start with your strengths. The first one is really, really obvious- rhyme scheme. You do such a good job of rhyming ...

Hello, K here to review your piece! I hope this is helpful! First comment has to be on the color of the words. I literally thought something was wrong with ...

Hello, k here to review what you have so far! This will be a short review since it's such a short piece, but I'll try to help as much as ...

Hello, I'm K here to review your piece. First, let's start with your strengths. You storytelling skill is good, and I can tell you are a creative person. This is ...

Hello, I'm K here to review! I hope this is helpful! I'm going to start with weaknesses first, as there are few, and then move on to your strengths! So ...

Hello, I'm K to share my thoughts with you :3 I'll go step by step for this one, since it's a song. First, "higher than mind." I'm not really sure ...

This song sounds like Poets of the Fall in my head, I really liked it! Could you post on my wall or message me when you post it on youtube, ...

Hello, I'm K here to review! Hopefully this will be helpful to you! Let's begin with your strengths. The first strength is super obvious- you are amazing at separating lines ...

Hello, I'm K here to sort of review! But mostly praise! Your poem is the reason I am a poetry nerd. This was so beautifully written and well done. I ...

Hello, K here to review your poem! Hopefully this is helpful! Let me begin with your strengths. I love, love, love the way the first letter of every stanza spelled ...

Hello, K here to review! Hopefully this will be helpful to you! First, strengths. You do a great job of sticking to one story throughout your poem, and you convey ...

Hmm, K here to review! I hope this is helpful! First, your strengths. This was a good poem, and you stuck to ONE theme throughout it, which is always a ...