KJ

Thanks you guys :D

Venom: Wow. A thanks feels just a little inadequate for that post. I guess all I can do to tell you how grateful I am is to post more of ...

*Mental note to KJ* Get back to this... If I haven't posted a review by tomorrow night, will you be kind enough to give me a poke, Angel?

Oh. THIS is the wretched rewrite. Whoops. Hmph.

WrittenSoul: I'm... speechless. Thanks for your review. It was quite overwhelming. As to your uncertainty to when it's past and present, just thought I should let you know that every ...

Venom: Thanks for reading and pointing out those couple things. I'll be sure to take your advice when editing :) Next chapter will be along either tomorrow or the next ...

Thanks, Moon :)

-EDITED- There wasn't much to do, but... *Shrugs*

Angel of Death: Wow, thanks :oops: You make me want to post the next chapter right now! :roll: But again, thanks for reading. The next chapter is already written and ...

Mike: Nic is a girl... I'll have to make that more clear, I guess. As to detail, and all that - this is an extremely short chapter. I intend to ...

LittleBitCold: I was the one who critiqued all of AshleyLee's chapters, so technically I was the one who "flooded the hole genre" with her edited chapters. And by the way, ...

Everyone: Thanks for the feedback. I'll be sure to edit as soon as I've finished the book (Getting close!). And Olivia: Wow, I think your comment is the most flattering ...

CHAPTER FOURTEEN: I think this is my favorite chapter so far. It was midnight when I was reading this and editing, so I didn't really catching anything because my eyes ...

CHAPTER EIGHT: Wow Sophia has a lot of tantrums. Maybe you should cut back on those... Yeah. That's all I got. You already have al my corrections, so... I have ...

CHAPTER SEVEN: I notice that you slip into the past tense sometimes. Gotta watched that. Also, there should ALWAYS be a space after every period :)