KJ

Funny.

The dialogue was good, and pretty deep. It made me think, and I liked that. The plot, what we've seen of it, is interesting and not dull--a plus. I guess ...

I still remain firm when I say that I think you should leave it at the first part. The rest of these take away from the story and just prolong ...

I didn't like the point of view you told the story from, but the rest was okay. I felt bad for the weepy writer and felt the guy's anger. The ...

Very intelligently written. But you've only begun the plot, so I'll be watching for more.

For me, it was okay. I wasn't that interested. It had a Dr. Suess feel to it. It felt like you were scratching the surface of something that has potential ...

Pretty decent. I liked the title, how is was short and just one word. The poem itself had a good flow, was all tied together, and didn't make me fall ...

This was good. I actually understood what you were saying, and what was happening. The words were well-put, no mistakes from what I can see. Good. I'm really glad I ...

In general, it was okay. The little details put in there were pretty cool, though. There wasn't anything that stuck out to me. Not badly written, but not especially striking ...

I loved the descriptions and details. Points for originality, also. I don't think I've ever read something like this, so good for you.

It was interesting. I felt like there was something being said there that wasn't obvious, like poetry. Does need work, however. Just on the formatting, I think. It's a neat ...

Wasn't attention grabbing. I got bored and to be honest, I didn't finish. Has potential, but needs work. Might want to add spacing between paragraphs.

I liked the title. And I also liked how you put it all together. I don't have anything particularly negative to say--just fix the grammar and punctuation errors, and make ...

I really liked this. I have no idea what Quizilla is, so I can't say anything about reading something that reminded me of something I read "back in my Quizilla ...

I like the way you went back and forth like you did. Original. And it was a good plot. I was enraptured. I really have nothing critical to say about ...