JustisMarez

I liked this. It reminded me of a lot of 'Just friends' kids in my school, maybe even me and my friend. :P I think you should make this a ...

I really liked this, it was different than I've read or am used to reading. I'm not that into poetry but this was good. I like how you told it. ...

This flows so good together, I love it. I can image someone singing it like ever so lightly. I like it. It's soothing in a wordy way. :P I like ...

Hey Ed. I haven't talked to you or seen your work in like a year now. Woahh. I saw this on the homepage and I figured I'd take a look. ...

Is this a real poem or just telling us about you in a poemtic way? Lol but I did like it! I pretty much suck at writing love poems...well any ...

I was pourndering upon the lyric poetry and I found this...I liked it! Your really good at writing! I just recently started poetry, I'm trying to read up on it ...

Hmm...I liked this poem. It strikes my interest. The way its writen and the rhythem - as everyone above my post has already said. This is how I feel sometimes ...

This was kind of depressing...but in a good way. I liked this. I only saw a few errors which Durrie already got. The my for me and spacing your paragraphs ...

Hm. I liked this chapter! I also like all the other ones too(: I loved the part with the pj's! That made me laugh! I remember you asking me about ...

Comments in red The next three months were about the same. There was a physical exam every Friday, and Peter and Elijah didn't miss a single one. Every time, there ...

On the second floor, Peter waited outside of a small office. Suddenly, a large man with broad shoulder s , and a rough face, opened the office door and looked ...

An eleven year old schizofranic? Nice. I liked the ending. Dear World, you cradled me in your arms for 11 years, never warning me of the troubles you would give ...

This was pretty good. I liked it. About the whole lantern, cellphone dill...you should probably make the lantern a flash light? Then again why would someone be carring a flash ...

Lol. I liked this. It was funny. Comments in red "Pete r , are you okay?" Peter, holding his hand on his forehead and his head drooped said quietly, "Yeah." ...

I really liked this. Like Isha said, it was depressing but in a good way. It kind of reminds me that my older brother could be killed in Afganistan...not sure ...