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I agree, it was very suspenseful! i loved it though and you did a wonderful with the details! and i am very glad that luke did survive! i was scared ...

I loved it meg! it's really well written and the descriptions are great. it painted a beautiful picture in my head. ok so about this information overload you mention, it's ...

Oh my goodness meg!!! this poem was absolutely LOVELY!!! It was so well written and descriptive! The words you used were so... hmm what's the word i'm looking for? moving? ...

hey so i finally got around to writing you a response, since that seems like what you want =) haha ok well i really liked it! Just a few quick ...

Hey jada!! ok well i really liked it!! it was very descriptive and painted a beautiful picture in my mind. This was my favorite part: A page turned Just waiting ...

Nice. I like it! and thanks so so much for changing it back!! There was a few things i did notice thought that i think should be changed. Like when ...

Oh jade! this was so sad! it was so well written though. i loved the way that it painted vivid pictures in my mind. My favorite was the one where ...

I really liked this! it's very interesting and made me want to keep reading. i was very sad when it was over. I think mostly everyone covered the grammatical errors ...

Hey i liked it! and well, i guess it is a little twilightish but you can always change it, make it something different. Do i know these blue eyes? am ...

Hey, I really like this! And be as brutal as necessary... Ummm.... OK!!! Haha just kidding. I really did enjoy it. Just a few suggestions though, like everyone else, you ...

This story was really interesting! I hope you continue writing it! OK so some of the run-on sentences suggested above would become very choppy if you turned them into separate ...

This is sweet! I like the way the second stanza painted a vivid picture in my head! I have to agree that maybe you should capitalize the first letter of ...

Ok jade, I loved it! It explained the situation well and is great for a prelude. There is just a few things i saw. I could never really describe our ...

I have to agree, this letter is very emotional and i could see someone actually writing this. There was just one thing i saw Don’t you think I saw how ...

I liked this story. It had a lot of good descriptions in it which made it easy for me to picture what was going on. What was the baby's name ...